The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
The maps shed lights on how the museum had been transformed during the 20-year period, in 1990 and 2010.
As can be seen from the maps, the area had experienced a significant modification in its overall layout. What is most noticeable is the extension of the parking space and the replacement of some amenities.
Considering the outside space of the museum, time period witnessed the disappearance of the South-East garden with a view to make way for the expansion of the parking area. Along with the garden, the area which used to be a cottage in 1990 had been conversed into a coffee shop.
In terms of the inside facilities, while the entrance and restaurants were kept intact during the mention period, the shop had been widened to the West boundary, hence, sized down the space for the existing exhibition room. The exhibition area in the corner, to the right of the entrance, which was separated as two in 1990 had been merged into one in 2010. The maps shed lights on how the museum had been transformed during the 20-year period, in 1990 and 2010.
As can be seen from the maps, the area had experienced a significant modification in its overall layout. What is most noticeable is the extension of the parking space and the replacement of some amenities.
Considering the outside space of the museum, time period witnessed the disappearance of the South-East garden with a view to make way for the expansion of the parking area. Along with the garden, the area which used to be a cottage in 1990 had been conversed into a coffee shop.
In terms of the inside facilities, while the entrance and restaurants were kept intact during the mention period, the shop had been widened to the West boundary, hence, sized down the space for the existing exhibition room. The exhibition area in the corner, to the right of the entrance, which was separated as two in 1990 had been merged into one in 2010.
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- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Environmental damage is the problem of most countries What factors damage the environment and who should takes responsibility 89
- Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news However others believe that they can learn news better through other media Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- The maps below show a plan of a city in 1950 and at the present Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Young people are now spending more and more time and money following fashion trends What is your opinion Is this a positive or negative development 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 33.7804878049 178% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 965.302439024 164% => OK
No of words: 334.0 196.424390244 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74850299401 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64069819537 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.287425149701 0.547539520022 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 283.868780488 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3617907605 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120886390579 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601269175012 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657195216581 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799387619514 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588636400065 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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