Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, many companies use online platform for meetings and training because the trend of sociallising online is increasing day by day. When the pandemic has been outbreaked strongly, many people could not meet others in person and prefer meeting and training online. However, I think that is a negative development. And this essay below will discuss and explain more about my points of view.
To begin with my stating, meetings and training are increasingly taking place online, the trend can help to tight with money and to save time. They are also able to cut a substantial amount of cost. For example, if people meet and train online, they will save money about travelling costs and conference venue rent fees in the company. Beside that, it saves time for non-commuting on the congested roads required by the participants.
On the contrary, there are different problems when the meetings and traning are taking place online. About the first notion, it can lead to the depression, technology is creating a gap between humans. In fact, meeting online is considered as a boring connection whilst meeting in person makes the relationship stronger and much more long-lasting. People cannot concentrate on the certain prolems when there are a plenty of surrounding-happening impacts. To the second negative aspect, that is health-related drawbacks due to online socialisation. Spending too much time on mobile phones and computers for socialising can lead to an unhealthy lifestyle which causes obesity, eye-effects or other diseases. Apart from that, it also affects to the brain capacity to focus and learn on new things.
In conclusion, although online meetings and training have less expensive costs coupled with an interesting display of information but I would like to stick to my point of view that online conversations have negative influences towards people’s manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98621090273 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0527878425 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212754578886 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620944483225 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066095224826 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13000875938 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346113317496 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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