Organized tours to remote communities and other countries are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment?
In recent years, there has been a growing tendency for tourists to travel to remote locations and communities on organized tours . I am the belief that it is a positive development because of many advantageous effects which I would explain in this essay.
On the one hand, the development of tourism in rural areas has some detrimental effects. Firstly, it is contamination . To be specific , the increasing number of visitors means the huge resources of waste discharge into the environment. For example, in some tourism locations , there is tons of plastic rubbish from restaurants by food service.Moreover, the culture infrastructure would change because of the tourism industry. The authority would build varieties of modern facilities to afford traveler’s demand, therefore it disappears the historical artifacts in local areas over time. Consequently, these issues are caused by the tourism industry.
On the other hand, there are several benefits that outweigh the drawbacks above. It is undeniable that this tendency is a great opportunity to support the local workforce. Because of increasing numbers of tourism services, there are many working chances for local residents. For example, these employment places include hotels, car rental agencies, restaurants, tour companies, souvenir shops, and equipment shops, among others to supply plenty of work. Additionally, the government can promote culture via commercial tourism.It is clear that some tourist attractions draw much attention from visitors which means that it is well-known to the world. As a result, two factors are extremely potential for the country to enhance not only the tourism field but also the economic foundation.
In conclusion, although there are still downsides about the environment and local artifacts , I realize that it is a positive trend for local residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56183745583 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08220700148 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3601361325 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247944775893 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692717669339 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651016931736 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157128789907 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609122885927 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.