It is not necessary to travel to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet . Do you agree or disagree ?
In the era of 4.0 development, any information can be found easily only through the internet, books and newspapers. It is for that reason that many people believe that in order to absorb the culture of many regions and countries, it is not necessary to go there, but only through books, the internet or movies. In this essay, I will express my disagreement with that point of view.
Movies that reflect social realities will often give us a more special multi-dimensional perspective than just going around to learn about life. Furthermore, it also reduces the time we spend on learning or approaching the hidden corners of many countries that it is excessively complicated for understanding will be brought to the small screen, as a result that we can easily recognize the negative. The Internet and books are similar, instead of images it will be written in the form of stories or statistics in an easy way to understand. Basically, watching movies, reading stories or searching over the internet all provide a large amount of knowledge in a short period of time and have many perspectives for us to refer to.
However, it also carries a lot of risks. We are often taught not to believe what we read in the Internet, due to we cannot verify the accuracy about the information or simply because of the headlines. Books too, it is often written from the perspective and subjective feelings of the authors, if the writers are people with a large vision, the information in the books will bring many values, even thought if they write the book based on personal emotional or imagination, the story in it will no longer be true, the information from there will also become less realism.In fact, movies are commonly a form of entertainment, the filmmakers who want high revenue should create an amazing script, if it is made in a different way from the reality to attract more viewers from many ages. After all, the director and actor wants to achieve is profit only, thus there is no guarantee that the information is correct. Therefore, why do not people go and acquire knowledge from our own perspective, culture is not simply liked, there are often specific reasons and meanings for people to follow it, experience it themselves. Experiencing and learning will be much more interesting and realistic.
In conclusion, I do not agree with that point of view. Going outside is very necessary, if you really want to know more about people and culture in the other places, the best way is traveling and experience it yourself. Lying at home and learning through books or other platforms is still only someone else's point of view, it is not highly objective and may not be accurate.
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...create an amazing script, if it is made in a different way from the reality to attract more viewer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, thus, after all, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 461.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81778741866 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77798906389 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509761388286 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.497363655 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.8125 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8125 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262449102677 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754004402148 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490175111937 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1544836288 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552845603627 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.