It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently a lot of progress has been occurred in terms of visiting impassable places by growing up the technology in terms of transportation and required facilities. Although it has some advantages like developing tourism industry, and help scientist to explore new things, there are some disadvantages such as the high price and change the wildlife and natural ecosystem by entering the humans. In this essay has been tried to discuss this issue to present my conclusion.
It is undeniable that possibility to visit remote zones which had been very difficult or even impossible before will be help to the people of mentioned area by increasing the tourists which will be accompanied with new jobs, earning more money and growing the welfare and medical facilities. Moreover, the scientists will be able to explore new things about the unknown culture and customs of people who live there and so on. For instance, recently some new languages have been finding by travelling to amazon jungles and visit the new tribes.
On the other hand, the high price of such travel will be lead to unavailability for all the ordinary people with normal budget to travelling. In the other words, the majority of people prefer to consume their money to travel experienced and more enjoyable places, especially about the families. The last point as the most important problem is related to the effect of entering non-native people to remote places with specialized citizens or uninhabited zones. Certainly the wilderness environment will be changes by increasing the population and installation new facilities. As a long term problem, it may affect the rare and special culture and inhabitant of unknown zones or even eliminate them gradually.
In conclusion, I believe that the disadvantages of travelling to remote natural environments are stronger argument rather than the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92576865494 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556666666667 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9173106608 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.083333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189326343461 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659005930967 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610051785349 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12865671163 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534756108051 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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