The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only langusge to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?
Due to tourism expansion, English has become the most in use language around the world. A proportion of people assume that this will turn English into the unique international language in communication. Although, it has advantages, there are still lots of disadvantages. This essay will discuss both the parts.
On the constructive part, having one universal language would enable greater understanding among countries. In other words, if everyone spoke one language, there would be flawless comprehension in numerous procedures. For instance It would promote acquiring knowledge and information exchange.Furthermore it will solve the main difficulty of scholars who want to take up their education in other nations. Therefore, with the help of common language, social interactions will be more effortless.
On the destructive part, it has some drawbacks such as disappearance of other languages. As a result of this, Not only vernacular will be abolished but also multiple cultures will be lost. Eradication of cultures which are inseprable component of each society will put an end to the real and valid recognition of domains. To illustrate, a research in Portugal expresses that a wide range of people speak only English and are not able to socialize by their mother tongue.Consequently ,after a few generations, the English lifestyle was applied on the portuguese community.
To conclude, despite the fact that having a single language will obviously allow trouble-free social intercourse, It will terminate the local speech and various cultures that should be preserved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52892561983 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3454643452 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5584877596 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299515050261 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951663148784 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806845427942 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168231879848 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829738756147 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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