Topic: The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of having only one language in the world
English is becoming the most prominent language around the world by the development of tourism comprised services and other factors over the years. So that, some people argue that this phenomenon is a reason why English turning global language. From my perspective, having just one language can bring both pros and cons for not only citizens but also nations.
On the one hand, having only one language brings many advantages for international relationship, communication and economic growth. First of all, it is better for people all around the world to communicate, exchange information via media platfroms without any languague barriers. For instance, if people from countries not using english such as Japan or Korea wanted to make friends with American or British, they would not need translation applications and dictionaries. As a consequence, the global relationship can be enhanced and avoiding conflicts. In addition, there are a lot of people want to travel aboard independently but language difference is a challenge to them. In order to solve this problem by speaking one language, the national economy will develop strongly in terms of tourism.
On the second hand, there are so many disadvantages needed to be considered of global language. Firstly, cultural diversity plays an important role in human life, especially languages so it is a threaten to the extinction of cultures which are contributed by acestors long time ago. As a result, loss of cutural indentity makes every nations look similarly and only one courlor and it is hard to distinguish between continents and areas. Secondly, having one language such as English is hard for people in other countries to speak fluently and improve specific accents, eventhough between areas in the same country. For example, people from regions America, England, Australia have english is their mother tounge and ssometimes they can not understand the accents from Asia so this is another communication barrier.
In conclusion, only one language spoken globally has some certain benefits such as enhance international relationship, support aspects of the development of each nation but there are some drawbacks for the local culture. I believe that people around
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...man life, especially languages so it is a threaten to the extinction of cultures which are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35897435897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93729844884 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595441595442 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5180378828 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5625 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362258957156 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107084408402 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735720056417 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241609020468 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789725318942 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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