Topic : some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Dicuss both views and give your opinion
In contemporary world, some people believe that we are rely more on each others while others think we are more self-sufficient and break out of dependence on anyone else. In my view, people have become independent today.
First and foremost, there are several reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent nowadays. It is obvious that the cost of living is higher than in the past so people can not afford to purchase what they want. For instance, almost people and specific youngsters depend on their parents for help to buy house or car and tuition for students. In consequence. They experience more complex and difficult life so they need to rely on others. Futhermore, current people are ambitious for everything in their life. It is clear that they usually spend most of their time on working in the office, do some part-time jobs, they assist their parents and babysitters in taking care of children or doing household chores
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
... world, some people believe that we are rely more on each others while others think ...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing is higher than in the past so people can not afford to purchase what they wan...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84567901235 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58653760891 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7528678994 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324177205126 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121535012684 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144439353327 0.0667982634062 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34321616609 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23018668196 0.056905535591 405% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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