Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
In the present day, opinions are divided on whether inmates spending more years in confinement is the optimal way to alleviate crime, or whether there are more effective solutions. Personally, while understanding why many individuals support the former, I am in favor of the latter.
Admittedly, putting criminals in jail for a longer time does partially help with crime reduction. In such an extreme environment, few opportunities to socialize can lead to a sense of loneliness, stress, and grief in prison, which is too epic for potential ones to think of breaking the law due to its severe consequences. However, one disadvantage to this is the escalating cost of maintenance of security and control in penitentiaries paid by government funds, which can be allocated to develop more educational facilities, curriculum, and courses for long-term effects on citizens’ awareness of wrongdoings.
Despite benefits from longer prison sentences, I would argue that investing more in education in terms of self-defense and moral courses would produce permanent effects. Through these types of classes, young and older citizens can gain understanding of why they should obey the law and even how to protect themselves from forms of violence such as physical assault or family abuse. Moreover, educational campaigns with real ex-prisoners sharing stories about their miserable lives in the prison can have a significant impact on those from an early age, which might help reduce wrongdoings in the future.
In conclusion, although letting prisoners serve longer sentences can exert effects regarding emotions among imminent criminals, I hold the belief that better options like investing in education could be considered because of its long-term effects.
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- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime 92
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school 84
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tress, and grief in prison, which is too epic for potential ones to think of brea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dered because of its long-term effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5037037037 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06553029581 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674074074074 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2660766933 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.111111111 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131996126046 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481965624958 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038431633857 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718595045453 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0075488274163 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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