Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Animal experiments are used nowadays to make progress in the medical field. Testing drugs on animals is not cruel as most of people think. May be some of them consider that the tested animals are suffering and it is not without ethical debates. If there are no researches, many people will die without cure. Experiments on animals determine safety of drugs to protect people’s lives. Because of that, urging these examinations is essential. This topic will talk about some reasons why animals’ experiments are beneficial for science, some examples for the achievements in this field and alternatives for them.
Everyday people face new disease. It had been started from defeating against the plague 1347s till now COVID-19, wherefore we need researches to preserve others’ lives. To illustrate, using animals enable researchers have a good chance to study human’s disorders and assure their survival. For sure the ultimate goal for these experiments is not abusing them physically. It is all about observation the reaction of specific body organ which has the same features as the human. For instance, the scientist has to study the behavioral feedback of the animal as result of that they understand the human being. Pets suffer from sadness and anxiety so vets seize that in a positive way by prescribing small doses of treatment. Yet they assist depressed people and animals too.
Safety of the human being is the most important thing on the earth. So it is not only animal testing helps in field of mental health, but also helps with shortage of eyesight. Vision restoration is goal that has been achieved by number of studies conducted with mice with poor vision. Furthermore, mice have long histories that make us understand genetics. In addition to that, progress in cancer, cholesterol, kidney diseases and joint replacements. Despite of these achievements, there are some alternatives like in vitro diagnostics and the stimulated patient. To illustrate the first one, it is based on tests that are done on human’s tissues or blood to detect diseases or other conditions. Then, the stimulated patient method is based on person who is trained to be real patient to stimulate a set of symptoms that help the medical field.
Eventually, these researches are done on specific animals to get reaction from specific organ. These experiments have been done on animals that might have organs like human, so the result will be accurate. Researchers are not physical abusers while doing that, they are trying to benefit the entire humanity. This topic may adopted another perspective with examples that will make the reader realize how worthy these experiments are. Moreover, there are many alternatives to get the right medicine that the patient need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...esting drugs on animals is not cruel as most of people think. May be some of them consider tha...
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Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... not cruel as most of people think. May be some of them consider that the tested a...
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... this field and alternatives for them. Everyday people face new disease. It ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... sadness and anxiety so vets seize that in a positive way by prescribing small doses of treatment...
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...sist depressed people and animals too. Safety of the human being is the most im...
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...ymptoms that help the medical field. Eventually, these researches are done on...
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... right medicine that the patient need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2324.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72515665506 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3966558729 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53571428571 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165826633456 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436947220296 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420938825217 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104384432493 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558611741202 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.