In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, continuing to live beside their families is a social trend of people who are mature. This essay will shed some light on both pros and cons of it.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that continuing to stay with the parents of mature people brings some benefits. In fact, to help their parents who are weak elders. Mature people should stay beside their family after they get a job, especially when they are ill and need the help from another to take care of them. In addition, they can share the necessary fees for their family such as electrical fees, water fees, gas fees, which is a great traditional moral of Asian culture. As a result, the society will be less pressured from these burdens.
Nevertheless, there are also several drawbacks of staying together with their families of mature people. Actually, because there is no financial pressure such as rental fees, meal fees, matures often have subjective opinions of needing to earn money. This leads to the fact that they are not financially independent to pay for essential gadgets and develop their careers. The second drawback is concerned, to meet the need to be married, the number of people in families will increase with different generations. This leads to rising relationship conflictions with each other.
In conclusion, although the decision of mature people continuing to stay with their parents brings benefits, it still holds many drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00420168067 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5624913344 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8977477224 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6153846154 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175370364175 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655030323353 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412438915372 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113021665584 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263531748182 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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