The diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar
The given diagram illustrates about the multiple steps involved in production of sugar out of sugar cane.
Overall, this process involves growing, harvesting, crushing, purification, evaporation, centrifuging and ultimately drying and cooling.
In this process majority of time is spent on growing sugar canes. It is estimated to take 12 to 18 months to reach maturity. This is followed by harvesting of crops which is performed either manually or using a dedicated machine. Even though employing labourers is a much cheaper option comparing to investing on a machine, it is noteworthy that machine is extremely efficient mode than humans.
Subsequently these sugar canes are crushed to form the sugar juice in the factory, which is then purified by filtering through limestone filter. Filtered juice is heated and excessive fluid is evaporated so that syrup form of sugar is produced. During the next step syrup is sent through a centrifuge where it separates sugar crystals. Finally these crystals are cooled and dried before sending to the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...xtremely efficient mode than humans. Subsequently these sugar canes are crushed to form t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...fuge where it separates sugar crystals. Finally these crystals are cooled and dried bef...
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Line 7, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and dried before sending to the market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39759036145 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.857784595 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674698795181 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2319123735 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166588109228 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610403792647 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630177730074 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992592973362 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506180365641 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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