As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions for these problems?
The world has witnessed significant development over the last decades. However, as cities become increasingly overcrowded, relevant issues occur along with them. The challenges and strategies in order to address these issues will be discussed below.
Even though urbanization and industrialization are positive trends and benefit for the posperity of nation, they are the main reasons behind the high density of population which is problematic for many people. First, young people's tendency to gather in major cities either to look for jobs or business opportunities results in the lack of accommodation. Major metropolitan areas are well-known for being where international and national firms setting up their businesses and create a wide range of jobs. As a consequence, young people from all walks of life flooding in these centres with the hope of having a job and cause the demand as well as the price of housing go up. In addition, overpopulation in major areas also the main cuprit of the overload of metropolitan infrastructure and facilities. Pollution, pressure on public transportation and services could be attributable to the increase of personal vehicles and commuters in cities. Likewise, young people who live in major cities areas are likely to experience the lack of water, energy if demand of the commodity exceed their capacity supply. Thus, impacts from city expansion may be exacerbated if there are no strategies to curb the movement.
There are some solutions can be taken into account to deal with the effects of rapid urbanisation including government interference and ehnacement of individuals awareness. The first measure is that government should invest in other less developed regions of countries. Establishment of necessary constructions such as road, hospital, school and other relevant facilities would stimulate the flourishment of the areas and appeal young people to settle in these places. Additionally, enlightened policies and tax incentives should also be introduced to attract investment of economic organizations which means that there will be more employment opporunities for young workers. Finally, young people should learn about the advantages if they live in the rural areas and become country dwellers. By moving to remote region the young are able to enjoy the fresh atmosphere and avoid urban disturbances which are common in major cities. This can only be done with the support of the authorities by educating young individuals through mass media and social campaigns.
In sum, young citizens in major cities may be placed at risk of housing shortage and other issues associated with lack of necessary services. With the help of governments to fund other areas and raise public awareness, the affects could be ameliorated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, likewise, look, may, so, thus, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42032332564 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05986404094 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575057736721 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8759565799 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.35 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.65 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194339071498 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569255222511 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515551023666 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10684803848 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622624260059 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.