The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries
The given bar chart illustrates the expenditure of four European countries in six different items.
In general, while British people spend more money on these things than other countries, German residents are the exact opposite.
Looking into details, the British spend more than 170 thousand pounds on photographic film, which is double the amount spent on tennis racquets and personal stereos. Meanwhile, German is recorded to have the least expenditure on most of the categories, except for perfumes. People from this country spend 150 thousand pounds on tennis racquets while they just spend approximately 145 thousand pounds on photographic film and CDs.
Another point worth noticing is that France and Italy rank second and third in turn. Both French and Italians are likely to be fond of photographic film as they spend nearly 170 and 160 thousand pounds respectively on this item. Moreover, the French and Italians share the same expenditure on toys at just under 160 thousand pounds. Last but not least, although the French spend more money on photographic film and CDs than Italians, their spending is less than Italians’ in terms of perfumes, tennis racquets and personal stereos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, second, so, third, while, except for, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2722513089 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6337732632 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.792356868 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.875 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829413266302 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494917496265 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964943423615 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882436996335 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122525845161 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.