All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born. What is your opinion?
The role of father is undeniable in modern society as breadwinners and taking care of their loved ones. It is therefore suggested that all fathers should be allowed to have maternity leaves when their babies are given birth. I somewhat agree with the viewpoint as appearance of the newborn's fathers is of great importance to the babies as wel as their mothers. However, there are some professions, which may not enable fathers to gather with their families in the special events.
Given that dads are able to stay besides their wives who are in the reproduction process, dad can provide necessary mental and physical support to their beloved wives. This stems from the fact that women have to experience weak state of minds and pains while they are pregnant. Thus, the appearance of their husbands could help pregnant female ease their minds, aid them go through the painful process, and look after their babies. If the fathers are not able to come home with their families for the period, wives are likely to suffer extreme difficulties.
Another justification for fathers maternity leave is that it would benefit their new babies regarding their natural development. Apart from nuturing their newborn kids, regular interations between dads and babies in early age is crucial in the growth of the babies. It is proven that conversations with fathers can stimulate the linguistic ability among early-aged children while observation of their dads supplying these kids with role models to learn goof patterns of behavior.
Admittedly, some specialized jobs may not permit absence of their male workers even in special circumstances. For instance, sodilers who must maintain their service in important missions, may not be able to go home even though their wives are under pressure. However, such jobs are few, therefore permissions to be absent from work is needed in most cases.
In sum, father can assist their wives mentally and physically, and taking care of their newborn children, albeit their absence may be impossible in some types of work. I partly agree with the view that all fathers should be permitted with parental leaves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 454, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to goof'
Suggestion: to goof
...ng these kids with role models to learn goof patterns of behavior. Admittedly, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for instance, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15142857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57363238895 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545714285714 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9095833642 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265779206805 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979954148954 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560359304249 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168680189958 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593915385993 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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