The line graph illustrates the research expenditure of US administration on five fields (health, space, energy, general science, other) from 1980 till 2008.
In a general overview, the U. S. Government spent the most in health research sector whereas the least was spent in general science.
In 1998, with regard to health research, the expenditure started with around $8 billion, this budget slightly dipped to $7 billion in 1984 and gradually continued to double the amount spent in this category in 1996, in the next four years drastically increased to $22 billion reaching its peak in 2000 before dropping to $18 billion in 2004. The US government spent around $6 billion dollars to explore space in 1998 and saw a dip in 1984 spending $5 billion, whereas the figure increased continuously reaching $14 billion in 2008.
Meanwhile, there is also an increase in the money invested into the research of energy and general science, from approximately $2.5 billion and $5 billion in 1980 to $ 5 billion and $7. 5 billion. In contrast, other being the only sector which saw a decrease in expenditure, which fell approximately from $7. 5 billion in 1980 to about $5 billion by 2008.
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your opinion 73
- Some people say that children should go to school as young as possible while others believe that children should go to school of at least 7 years old Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- The table and chart show the time spent at leisure and household activities in 2008 67
- The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia Europe and the rest of the world 84
- When new towns are planned it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centres for people To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, while, in contrast, in general, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07894736842 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82591072578 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.4539864461 43.030603864 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.625 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157739282853 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776494813977 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776575419742 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111528548891 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527066604947 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.