Today news plays an important role in people’s lives and news media are more influential than ever before. Why is it this case? Is it positive or negative?
The role of news and its impacts have become increasingly significant in recent years. Techological breakthoughs is the main drive behind the phenomenon, and I believe that this is a positive development.
Given the advent of smart equipment and the internet, people nowadays are able to access to news sources at anywhere and anytime. For instance, travelers, who have internet connection and a smartphone can check weather news of their destinations before visiting with just a few clicks. In addition , online media platforms provide people with a greator amount of new sources and category, which can be tailored to individual needs. This relieves internet users the budern of manually accumulating information. If the state-of-the-art instruments are not invented, people may find it difficult to attain data conveniently.
Another factor that contributes to the prevelance of news media today is the creation social media. These platforms allow individuals to connect to like-minded people, and share the information that may be mutual interests of them. This not only fosters the exchange of information, which make them appealing to the major public but also enable people to voice their thoughts that encourages democracy worldwide.
Apart from the benefits, there are certain downsides of the ways news is broadcast these days. Some taboo subjects such as violence, sexuality, drugs are rife on news media. If governments do not seize control over the topics, they would have detrimental impacts on young individuals.
In sum, technological advances could be attributable to the significance of news and its effects on the society. I concur with the view that the development brings more good than harm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45149253731 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03984675861 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9532969805 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243953997861 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712345685413 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465714664174 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120340456439 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141702655944 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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