The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, a minority of individuals in the current contemporary society believe that the most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. The further essay will discuss and give an opinion on the topic above.
On the one hand, music not only helps people to reduce stress, but also moltivate and sends positive energies into listeners. As far as I am concerned, according to the Vietnam Ministry of Education, students who spend a variety of time listening to music and playing musical instruments have a higher happiness index than the ones who don’t. Furthermore, music is a huge source of energy for workers who are involved in working environments due to the fact that musical songs could help people increase their diligence and perseverance. As a result, music not only helps people work sustainably and flexibly but also increases their efficiency and productivity exponentially.
On the other hand, different types of music sometimes have a psychological effect on the mind of the human race and control their emotions. In general, sad and suicide music on social media could influence listeners negatively and decrease positive energy. As a result, although music has several beneficial functions, it still contains undesirable functions that pull down listeners’ emotions and sometimes increase their stress. Nevertheless, it still depends on each person’s style of music. If listening to inappropriate songs is a passion, for some people it will be a remarkable way to feel happy.
In conclusion, music has numerous aspects that people can exploit. Any function of music can bring benefits or outweigh them. Listners should have a wide knowledge of each function to choose the best one that suits for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27142857143 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90158295995 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6719547961 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281666006651 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101933959557 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940872817517 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18128953637 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681618150945 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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