People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons and effects of this?
In recent decades, the deterioration of family time has captured significant public attention due to its implication on family relationships. My essay will shed light on the reasons for this pattern before outlining a number of its influences.
Members spending less time with their families can be ascribed to a host of factors. First, because of an increase in the cost of living, parents become more career-oriented in order to cover these living expenses. Therefore, parents spend more hours at work and make less time for family, especially for their offspring. Second, children have a tendency to immerse themself more in social media thanks to the proliferation of technical advancement. It means that they would like to engage more in online conversations with friends than in real-life conversations with their family.
I would contend that the growing trend toward the decline of family time is going to have serious repercussions on family bonding. To begin with, when family members communicate less with each other, mutual understanding is likely to decrease. Hence, there could be more domestic conflicts and arguments, leading to a generation gap. Moreover, without parental close supervision, teenagers could be lured into social problems. To illustrate, parents spending less time at home leaves teenagers more likely to be vulnerable to negative influences from bad friends and adopt harmful habits such as smoking.
In conclusion, hectic work schedules and the excessive amount of time on social networking sites are two driving factors behind insufficient time for family. I believe that this trend exerts negative impacts on family connections and children’s development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51145038168 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99429366197 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9886160321 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282635365999 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941953223896 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083077188118 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158248036291 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352859076571 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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