There is certainly a difference in thoughts, ideas and actions between children, their parents and
grandparents. Why do these differences exist? Does it cause problems in your community, in your
opinion?
In a rapidly developing world, the differences in opinion, attitude and lifestyle of children from those
of parents and grandparents is obvious. This can be due to several reasons ranging from the invention
of new technologies to the influence of western cultures. From my personal standpoint, differences in
viewpoints do leads to various problems such as lack of intergenerational communication.
Emerging technologies such as smartphones, mobile applications, laptops and video games create
a cultural gap between two generations. While the parents prefer personal one-on-one interaction,
children use Facebook and Twitter to communicate with friends. The gap is further increased by the
spread of western ideas in developing countries. This is evident in the difference in the food habits of
parents and their children. The former prefers traditional homemade food, whereas the latter prefers
burgers and junk food. A recent survey conducted in India claimed that western cultural influence
spread through international brands such as Levi’s, McDonald's, KFC and Facebook and had decreased
the time children spent with parents in 2019 by at least 35 per cent as compared to 1998. This has
tremendously increased the differences in thoughts, ideas and actions between the two generations.
Because the older generation is not always broad-minded, their stubborn beliefs lead the youth to
turn arrogant and clumsy. These cultural differences result in a lack of communication between two generations which leads to improper guidance for youth on one hand and loss of cultural identity on the other. Social Scientists have proved that if children and parents do not spend sufficient time eating food and discussing ideas, events, history and culture, a community will forget its culture within five generations.
In conclusion, the differences in ideas and attitude of children and parents are natural. However, these
may seriously affect the development of a society and lead to a loss of identity. The differences should
be bridged by encouraging the parents and children to spend more time with each other, and I believe
that the COVID-19 pandemic has paved a way to strengthen family bonds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, whereas, while, at least, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58823529412 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09565495247 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2810460686 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25699291207 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902029049103 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771172320177 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074714611098 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662341608168 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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