In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those crimes?
It is true that violent crime has increased in many countries lately. This essay examines some main reasons for this trend and argues that governments can play a major role in preventing such crimes.
There are at least two important factors that contribute to the increasing number of criminals. First , millions of jobs have been lost globally due to rapid advancements in technology, innovations that have led to higher unemployment rates in many workforces. In these circumstances, some unemployed people have difficulty finding jobs, so they will end up in poverty, which is the root cause of crimes occurring to support their needs. Some reports show that a growing number of petty crimes have been reported in big urban cities with high unemployment rates, like drug trafficking, robbery, and smuggling. Secondly , some research proves that youngsters these days are more likely to carry out violent acts due to a lack of morality and self-control.
These acts of cruelty have been influenced on daily basis by the media, which features many violent contents in numerous forms of entertainment such as online video games, and criminals' TV shows. Obviously, the offender rate is on the rise, if strict regulations have not been enacted. It would be the government's responsibility to tackle this problem, which can enforce law-abiding citizens to comply. In order to fix the root cause, education should be equally spread throughout the country to provide some practical skills that are currently in demand in the workforce. For example, in some countries, the local authorities have established professional institutions that provide technical training courses in specific fields such as mechanics, electricians, or informative technology. Moreover, lawmakers should introduce stricter laws and announce more serious punishments in order to discourage the young from breaking the law. As a result of the earlier approaches, we could see a decrease in criminal offences, while the overall quality of life in the nation would be improved.
In conclusion, I truly believe that expanding educational opportunities and amending the punishment for the young would help resolve the issue, with the authorities playing a significant role to make changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71681415929 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55885737868 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648967551622 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.112857834 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.8 106.682146367 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135948462852 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500930399731 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549617264021 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889875190425 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684722832214 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.0946893788 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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