Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
At the viewpoint of some people getting a university degree is needed for better career prospects, while others have the opinion that extensive experience in the field and interpersonal skills would help a person to get hired by big firms. In my view, both higher degree and experience are essential to achieve jobs yet, university degrees boost the chance of employment ,especially in high-ranked jobs.
many believe that it would be easier for most people to find an appropriate job if they were university graduates with an academic degree. Because it puts people one step ahead of others who do not have, and this can be the determinant factor in getting a suitable job. Moreover, being a graduate from a well know prestigious university will be beneficially in the long run.therefore, In my perspective, a college degree acts as credibility and knowledge in a specific domain. It demonstrate the ability of individuals and their acknowledgement in a certain field.
However, many large companies are taking the approach to engage people with experience and skills instead of their education state. For example, Google company has completely omitted the university degree for cooperation. Moreover, one of the most successful businessmen, Steve Jobs, dropped out of college after one semester yet, he has become prosperous entrepreneur in the history of humankind.
To conclude, combination of both academic qualification and soft skills could open better career opportunities for an individual. Although there are some jobs that do not require a degree, having a degree will always be something essential to have better career options and job circumstances.
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- Writing task 1
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y degrees boost the chance of employment ,especially in high-ranked jobs. many be...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...yment ,especially in high-ranked jobs. many believe that it would be easier for mos...
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Line 2, column 480, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'demonstrates'?
Suggestion: demonstrates
... and knowledge in a specific domain. It demonstrate the ability of individuals and their ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33460076046 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10796441646 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7252881803 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243418199887 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085560495601 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661185002901 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143018887519 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571477283953 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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