In the time of cultural integration as today , people tend to travel, explore the beauty of the new culture at home and abroad.This trend has many benefits but also negative effects.
In many cases , travel brings many benefits.This is more specific when looking at multiple aspects.First of all , travel helps people relax and reduce stress.This mean , entertainment and relaxation services during a trip help people relax after a long time of work .Without travel services, it seems that people will hardly have time to rest and enjoy; thus affecting their mood , health and even work efficiency.In addition , in the role of economic development, the tourism trade also plays an extremely important role for countries .One of those countries also said that the tourism trade is a major source of income that increases GDP significantly every year.For example,Ms Katerina Sakellaropoulou , who is the president of Greece, showed that in the past 10 years, the country's total annual GDP has been 40% from tourist industry.
However, besides advantages, the tourism industry has also left negative effects. In particular , the fact that tourism activities take place with such a dense frequency seems to adversely affect the natural environment due to pollution.This is clearly seen in the fact that, after entertainment activities, a large amount of waste and scrap such as plastic bottles and plastic bags are left in the party area. As a consequence , the waste is not handled properly, leading to environmental population. To exemplify this point , according to the reality newspaper of VTV television, which is the national television of Vietnam , the news about Cua Lo beach has been seriously polluted after the summer with thousands of tourists coming to resort.In addition to the above impact, the construction of buildings and infrastructure such as hotels, resorts , and motels can destroy the habitat of wildlife and marine ecosystems.If tourism was not so popular , hotels and resorts would not seem to be built so much , so that the habitat of the species would not be adversely affected as it is now.
In conclusion, although the benefits of tourism are also very good , its negative effects are much greater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, so, thus, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25352112676 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95781022786 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597183098592 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 271.057641283 49.4020404114 549% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.428571429 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.7142857143 20.7667163134 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.1428571429 7.06120827912 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153430313699 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703801895059 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461911304988 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851668384024 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392414845298 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.0946893788 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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