Topic: Salary: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, money is considered the most concern for people when they choose their jobs. Personally, I disagree with this statement that salary is the key consideration when accepting a career, due to vital other sectors.
On the one hand, money is necessary to keep up with their lifestyle and meet all their needs. The first reason is that in a fast-paced and developed society, people have tended to appreciate materialism which is a major factor for people to earn a living day-to-day and motivate them to concentrate on their jobs. For instance, money helps everyone meet their needs, have a reasonable quality of life, and pay for their basics, such as accommodation, amenities, and food. Furthermore, productivity to compensation starts with employees feeling valued, which increases motivation and loyalty. Employees are more motivated to do a good job, and the longer people are with the company, the more they know and the more efficient they become.
It seems to me that job seeker have various elements apart from salary to choose a career, such as job satisfaction and working effectively. Firstly, a job is more than a paycheque- it needs to be a source of pride and self-respect. For instance, many people have worked a nine-to-five job for over 40 years and rightly expect to derive a feeling of fulfillment from their jobs. Nevertheless, motivation to work involves trust, self-knowledge, challenge, personal growth, and dignity instead of purely financial incentives. Finally, effective working brings meaning and purpose to any job if we fully engage in our work and adopt a positive attitude toward colleagues and superiors.
In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23344947735 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00524213499 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4522533537 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147775182691 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556279160803 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646731641897 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113138863913 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734617931655 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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