Humans are damaging the environment. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?
Human activities have been causing environmental degradation seriously. This essay attempts to shed light on some potential consequences of this problem and propose some viable solutions to resolve it.
In terms of consequences, the growth in the global population along with its labor activities is the main contributor to natural habitat destruction and environmental pollution. First and foremost, many organisms become extinct because of the human population increase. To be specific, people colonize more and more mainland and even destroy the forest to build concrete houses and create farmland for the growing population, and this has led to a decrease in the number of many species, such as monkeys, tigers, and birds, because of the loss of their habitat. In addition to population growth, humans are also polluting the environment with their manmade emissions and waste. Air and water pollution, for example, are two of the most remarkable consequences resulting from human activities.
To combat this issue worrying issue, several feasible steps should be taken. Governmental bodies should work out new accommodation policies to reduce natural land colonization for construction and agriculture purposes. For example, local governments can impose regulations to limit annual construction and apply policies to encourage people to live in apartments instead of ground houses. Besides, cooperations whose activities create pollutants should be forced to be responsible for resolving them. Since they are the main contributor, those companies should be charged additional taxes to fund environmental protection projects.
In short, there are serious repercussions attributable to this negative phenomenon, and it is crucial that the aforementioned measures be implemented to deal with this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, for example, in addition, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77902621723 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14516216689 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647940074906 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3758540079 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173421536498 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568248537677 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602440592608 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118050253633 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690312432849 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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