University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The number of students based on gender in every subjects should be accepted equal by university. The number of male and female students who be equal can give balanced idea and they will know their passion on the subjects.
There a lot of opinions will be better for discussion in the class. Therefore, balanced idea between man and female result new knowledge and experience on some subjects. For example, definition of perfume in this era is so different, the female argue that perfume is all as to beauty. They have various tools or kind of skin cares, but if you look the male, they do not care about perfume because the important thing is a clean body.
Every subjects with equal number of gender students describe that the university can know where definitely subject’s passion of students. This case should be able helping campus to trace the student’s abilities. For instance, in the sport subject depending on posture, physics, and stamina, it shows the male will be dominant, but if look at the subject that focus on number, it will be dominated by the female.
In conclusion, balanced idea and know the passion of students are the important things on this topic. If it is possible, this issue has to be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84905660377 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56796195889 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6905384566 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4545454545 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29126415767 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109632963611 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110802750888 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177657482279 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124777173823 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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