You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
-explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
-say how your work could be done while you are away
-ask for his-her help in arranging it
Dear sir or madam, I write this letter it is due to interest to work in you company that international company and I would get this opportunity to get it. I have read the article about your company have a huge market in few country
The reason why I apply this job because currently in this international company need a programmer which provide tools or website and it can be easier for consumers to choose a products or goods. Particularly, my major have relation with company’s necessary and I can make a website.
While working at there, I have some of the planning such as make a project which appropriate the needs of company. The project have wrote by me concerned program or information technology which useful to improve sales.
But, before doing these tasks, I must consultation with the holder or head division and I hope they can help me to realize it who have a lot experiences .
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- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared
- it is believed that some people say that in all level of education from primary schools to universities too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills 61
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and inc 56
- some people like to try new things for example places to visit and types of food Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with 56
- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
...t can be easier for consumers to choose a products or goods. Particularly, my major have r...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ebsite. While working at there, I have some of the planning such as make a project which a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
... the needs of company. The project have wrote by me concerned program or information ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to realize it who have a lot experiences .
^^
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...realize it who have a lot experiences .
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64779874214 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7987092449 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7032856515 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198103668179 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840988428196 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819708859656 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105704555513 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970069628156 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.