Task 2: In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that in some parts of the world, a growing number of young people, including many graduates, are unlikely to leave home and become independent of their parents. While this tendency can be advantageous in some aspects, I firmly believe that these are outweighed by the disadvantages.
On the one hand, it is incontrovertible that living with parents can help youngsters make the most of their time to economize. Many young people find difficulty in renting their own accommodations due to their lack of experience in taking up a property mortgage. Furthermore, they also have to deal with numerous problems regarding repaying student loans or purchasing educational equipment. Even when they are graduated, many youngsters still have to shoulder an ever-increasing financial burden stemming from daily consumer goods, which can be considerably mitigated when living in an extended family. Furthermore, young people can be also advantaged by sharing the overhead costs with their parents of running the family home and contributing to paying bills. This also supports their parents, who may themselves be struggling financially to meet their living expenses.
On the other hand, there are two primary drawbacks of continuing to live with parents. Despite being supported in terms of financial backgrounds, many youngsters need to gain more experiences in living independently, which is of paramount importance to get ahead in life. For instance, they need to take responsibility for their own finances, for raising a family or simply enjoying their private adult life. Secondly, from the perspective of parents, they may want to allocate more time for themselves, free of family responsibilities. After all, they have spent many years nourishing their children and helping them to achieve higher education, with the aim of putting their knowledge gained into practice and pursuing a successful career, so parents now deserve some time for themselves.
In conclusion, although continuing to live with parents can bring some notable benefits, I would argue that the drawbacks are far more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, while, after all, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42553191489 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0937919571 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58358662614 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9382441994 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300612623884 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100950463466 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406357352271 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176843267146 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471790180562 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.