Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?
Some people believe that they waste too much money and time for the protection of wild animals and birds. From my perspective, i am disagree for this opinion for many reason.
The protection of wild animals is protecting the culture and the development of countries. In some region have in the world also have their religion. For instance in India, they took many wild animal such as snakes , tiger… are becoming god; to bless them. The protection of wild animals and birds be a part of development of country, such as the goverment can scale-up the tour visit jungle place where wild animals live in.In addition, the scientists can take the wild animals are source for research to understanding the habbit and routine of animals. For example the doctor that they can research about snakes to create a medical helping people who are poisioned lead to the economic of the country increase rapidly. Therefore, protect the wild animals and birds bring many benefit for the development and maintain culture of many countries.
The wild animals and birds are extremely valuable natural resources. It take an important position for contribution to create ecological balance, ensuring a healthy living environment for people. For instance the first benefit that wild animals bring for people is biodiversity, create many eco-system. Secondly is valuable of economic, and the third is helping for agriculture, people using natural enemies of insects killing others insects. Last but not least, contribute in Intangible heritage for many composer for many song.
Although facing with a wild habitat, have many attack from wild animals, the advantages outweight the disadvantages. In my opinion, i disagree with this statement for several reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27240143369 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72514510005 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530465949821 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.613857746 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275287285155 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110644812509 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725156633927 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189797584525 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747958565562 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.