Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries if they wish.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, brain drain is quite ubiquitous in different countries. While some people opine that working professionals should serve the community where they learnt their skills, others alleged that they should have the liberty to perform their duties anywhere around the world. This essay will discuss that why the job seekers should not be deprived of their basic right of living and working in any country.
On the one hand, it is undeniably important for the skillful people to stay and work in their country or origin where they grew as a professional. They are the driving force of the economy, and its progress and development is dependent on them. If the brilliant minds leave the country, then they take with themselves creativity and innovation as well. Take for instance, Pakistan, where the brain drain is deteriorating the country financial conditions. The situation can be further exacerbated, when the different sectors experience the shortage of staff in different occupation levels. To exemplify, the Canadian health care system is broken, due to lack of doctors or nurses, as many of them have abandoned the country because of inflation and high cost of living. It is due to these reasons, the talented populace is obliged to pay back the favor to the country in the shape of working there.
On the other hand, human cannot be hindered from the exploration of the outside world, as it is their basic right and necessity. It is unlikely that every country is perfect and deprived of all the problems. In some societies the issues such as crimes, economic downturn, recession, lack of employment and resources etc, are more prevailed and in such conditions people often search for a better home for their family. It can be evidently seen now in Pakistan, that almost half the population who can afford is ready to be abandoning the country due to crimes, high cost of living, no jobs, economic and political instability. Moreover, the overseas professionals also supports their country by sending back the money to their dependents in the form of foreign remittance, which indirectly strengthens the country economy. Therefore, they should have the free will to support their family anywhere around the world.
In conclusion, either the skilled individuals should be free to perform duties anywhere or only in a country of their literacy origin, is a controversial issue. This essay discussed that it would be a wrong move to keep them locked in a particular country to do occupations. In my opinion, people only grow in their profession, if they explore the world and work in different countries under different experts. So I would suggest, talented people should be free to do occupations at any destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06873614191 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76674871498 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516629711752 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8705767001 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.55 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409148295478 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114110855132 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745304916081 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268043783153 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439485660964 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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