Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, traffic accidents increase more and more so that communities have a tendency to increase the minimum legal driving age to raise road safety. These solutions have a huge influence on both benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, the government set a higher legal age to allow driving is the most effective way to reduce traffic accidents and improve road safety. Specifically, because teenager don’t have enough fully understanding about how serious consequence by their under-control action so it can lead to a bad driving habits. For instance, because of the significant increase in the number of citizens using private vehicles which cause traffic congestion, it can lead to running a red light. Therefore, a large number of accidents are caused by teenager’s careless driving.
On the contrancy, although advantageous in certain aspects, this situation also impacts on an individual's routine. Instead of raising the minimum legal age, the government ought to enact stricter punishments on drivers such as license suspension not only for committing traffic-based infringement but also avoid posing a serious threat to society. Moreover, this solutions also affect individuals' daily commute; for example, the lives of citizens have become inconvenient from this change. Last but not least, in my perspective, we should raise people’s awareness to solve the core of the problem.
To sum up, I believe that the quantity of disadvantage is much more than advantage from increasing the minimum legal age because of the huge influence on various aspects in daily travel of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'habit'?
Suggestion: habit
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lead to running a red light. Therefore, a large number of accidents are caused by teenager’s care...
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Line 6, column 359, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... a serious threat to society. Moreover, this solutions also affect individuals daily...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42063492063 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98265963586 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2016779059 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195378301334 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661183186835 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704026179609 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12356184911 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420113909704 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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