There is an increasing number of people who believe that computers are a remarkable breakthrough in the last centuries. From my perspective, i partially agree with this belief for several reasons.
On the one hand, that computers contain a high application in numerous aspects of life is indispensable. In other words. This electronic devices enable people study from every corner of the world without coming to class, and access to limitless information source; there fore online classes self studying is greatly benefited by the development of the computer. Furthermore, computer also facilitate the medical field, in which doctors could look for the patents information as well as disease history to have a suitable diagnosis in shorter a mount of time; as a result, more patents would be cured and mistaken patent information would be reduced significantly. In addition, thank to computers, either personal and business communication become much more convenient. People could keep in touch with their friends, family within a second without face-to-face conversation, and enterprises could interact and exchange information within internal and external people much more advantageous.
On the other hand, computers had tremendous repercussions which inflicts serious damages to business and people physical and mental health. Along with the advancement of computer, the scamming techniques are also enhanced. Due to digitalized customer information, every single account which is register under these name would also be easily hacked such as bank account; as a result, hackers is able withdraw these without any difficulty. This cause banks loose thousand millions dollar every years. Besides, customers private information which is hacked could be exposed and sold for money. Moreover, repetitive using computer could pose a thread of eyesight,and increase level of depression. For instance, in the recent year, the blue whale , which is a well- know challenge on the internet, manipulate people mentally until they suicide. The participant of this challenge is mostly teenagers.
in brief, due to above merits and demerits of computer, i believe that people should take full advantage of computer and find suitable method to prevent its drawbacks
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Advanced technology has…
Advanced technology has brought about numerous critical invention for human kind in the last century, especially computers. In my opinion, I agree with this statement and the reason behind it will be stated in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, it is clear that there are other inventions that greatly benefit us such as smartphones. Firstly, phone is portable and can be accessible anywhere. This brings us tremendous convenience since phones are small in size and can be carried around in pockets or purses. For example, when going on holidays, remote workers can easily check notifications from work and communicate with their teammates just by using their phones. Secondly, smartphones can be quite handy when it comes to communication. In the past, friends had to meet up if they want to catch up but now they can easily send a text or even video call via phones with each other.
On the other hand, our work and study becomes more and more effective thanks to the invention of computers. Computers has wide screens therefore it will be very productive to search for information or do our work remotely. For example, when doing research on a certain topic, you can spontaneously watch videos while reading articles about it. In addition, computers have strong capacity and memory storage. This helps with performing multiple tasks and storing information, which is more superior compared to those of smartphones.
In conclusion, the invention of computers assists our community profoundly concerning of work and study efficiency in a way that other inventions can not. Thus, I opine this opinion in a positive view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, in addition, in brief, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9529489871 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618075801749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3200312985 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.411764706 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5882352941 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119453855173 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398150424077 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347443318663 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783498023162 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460979742262 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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