Task 2: Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. Others believe that there are more important factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports have long been an intensively competitive and popular field where diverse skills, physical standards and talents are quintessential qualities of a successful sportsman. While it is true that physical strength is a pivotal factor in being successful for some athletes in certain domains, other necessary attributes are equally important to secure triumph in every sport.
It is ostensibly apparent that physical strength offers athletes an edge in their field that necessitate muscular robustness, endurance and speed. Usain Bolt, an eight-time Olympic world champion winner in sprinting, is a perfect example of how physical strength plays a crucial factor in triumphant because sprinting requires explosive power and short-time acceleration coupled with endurance to compete against others, which he had in abundance due to his natural physical power. This enables him to speed up the first few meters of the race faster than his rivals and gain an advantage. In addition, Bolt's insurmountable strength allows him to sustain stamina over long periods and ignites his mental toughness, which is a crucial catalyst to winning during the race. Such physical strength effectively aided him to finish the race swiftly and break some world records.
Nevertheless, there is a crucial set of skills and qualities equally important to physical strength that people must acquire to succeed in sports. Take football, for example, a team sport that involves teamwork and technical and tactical-reading skills where a player with superior technical ability, such as dribbling and ball control, can overcome physical limitations and still be effective on the field. Physical strength is still needed for this sport but is not a determinant factor. Furthermore, players with good tactic-reading skills can read the game, anticipate their opponent's moves, and make quick decisions, contributing significantly to the team's success. Cristiano Ronaldo is a fantastic exemplar in this context; despite his athletic physique, he displayed the ability to create scoring opportunities for teammates and strategic collaboration in the 2016 UEFA Champions League final, in which Ronaldo assisted a decisive goal by teammate Gareth Bale, contributing to the team's success.
In conclusion, although physical strength can be advantageous in some competitive games, it is not the sole element for success. Athletes must hone other necessary attributes such as physical ability, mental fortitude, teamwork skills, and technique to excel in sports. Therefore, they must strive to balance developing their overall abilities to maximize the possibility of success in their chosen field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 657, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teams'' or 'team's'?
Suggestion: teams'; team's
...ions, contributing significantly to the teams success. Cristiano Ronaldo is a fantast...
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Line 5, column 989, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teams'' or 'team's'?
Suggestion: teams'; team's
...ammate Gareth Bale, contributing to the teams success. In conclusion, although phy...
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Line 7, column 400, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
... possibility of success in their chosen field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6608478803 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9851571965 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57855361596 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4512965337 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.333333333 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157664607849 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608337720115 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046771438767 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112231792168 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470436061624 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.