Full time students should take a lot of time to study, but it is also essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For students who take a full academic course load, they are often pulled in different directions, expected to balance classes, coursework, examinations and sometimes part-time work. However, in this time crunch, I believe it is imperative for them to be actively involved in non-academic activities while they are in school.
A non-stop and excessive focus on academic study without taking time for leisure activities is impractical and even detrimental to students' well-being and academic performance. Nevertheless, students who participate in extra-curricular activities, whether it is being a member of the school sport teams or an interest-related club, or volunteering with a community organization, will be offered a much-needed break from rigors of heavy workload.
Additionally, being active in non-academic settings can also foster meaningful social connections and network, which helps develop a sense of belonging to the school community. For those only being stuck on the seats all the time, the school experience would likely be extremely isolating and solitary if they do not feel connected to anyone anyway. In contrast, coming together to read and discuss a certain or being a cheerleader provides opportunities to meet mind-liked people with similar interests and goals. This social experience will become a type of support some day when they need help with their stress and challenges throughout their schooling.
It is also worth mentioning that the aftermath of students' involvement in extra-curricular activities is more promising in consideration of future career path. These experiences will be added to resume and enhance it, helping them stand out in a competitive job market, as interviewers selecting through similar educational backgrounds are likely to look for graduates who have well-rounded experiences beyond just academic achievements. By demonstrating leadership skills, teamwork abilities and commitment to various projects, students can successfully set themselves apart from other candidates as valuable assets to potential employers.
In conclusion, even though it might feel bustling and hustling between classes and other activities, there are numerous benefits in it. Therefore, student should make an effort to make life outside of the classroom dynamic so that they can have a mental break, better fit in the school community and an enhanced career prospects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 320, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'prospect'?
Suggestion: prospect
...school community and an enhanced career prospects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71111111111 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26938662273 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636111111111 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3747719967 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.153846154 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230443349479 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814663866187 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607774150102 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125954007846 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543819152227 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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