Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Other disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
The environmental problem has been receiving people’s attention around the world. While some people argue that a country can balance economic growth and environment protection, others have opposite notion. In my opinion, I support the former and this essay will discuss both views and some reasons for my opinion.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that it is really difficult to develop economy effectively and keep environment clean. Many countries concentrate on investing a huge amount of national funding for economic development, so environmental issues can be neglected. In addition, activities with an aim to boost economic may lead to degrade ecosystems. For example, China is one of the nations which have progressive economy, but it can not guarantee a clean environment.
On the other hand, I’m more convinced that linking between successful economy and environment protection is possible. Using renewable resources such as wind, sunlight or ocean waves instead of fossil fuel is more likely to not only keep ecological balance, but also develop economy. Moreover, nations need to pay attention environmental problems while exploiting natural resources such as coal or oil. An example can be seen as a country can take advantage of wind energy to produce electricity instead of fossil fuel combustion. If a nation can balance economic growth and solving environmental problems, it can thrive for a long time.
To sum up, I’m in favor of the notion that achieving economic goals and protect the environment can be happened with a nation which has economic strategies being environmentally friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38188976378 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01428029084 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.791701967 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26868105261 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900633720362 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748698624393 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174200431109 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101021787951 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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