Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether studying at university or getting a job straight after school is more significant. Both viewpoints are reasonable, but I personally lean towards studying at university or college.
It is understandable why some people think that getting a job straight after school is the best way to a successful career. By skipping higher education, students could get more experience sooner, which brings them more occupational prospects . For example, Bill Gates, one of the most successful men in the world, dropped out of Harvard University to pursue both his talent and desire in the computer science field.
On the other hand, I think that it is more advantageous to studying at university or college. Firstly, since obtaining a university certificate is an indicator of perseverance, passion and commitment needed to study a degree course for 3 or 4 years, a university degree is a convincing proof of the competence of the applicants. As a result, most employers could be more impressed by candidates who have qualifications, which in turn leads university graduates not only to better job opportunities, but also to higher incomes. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young individuals who do not have qualifications from a university or college may not be able to compete.
In conclusion, while studying at university or college has certain drawbacks, I would contend that its benefits are more glaring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31020408163 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2558844058 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2413373192 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320937434958 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127849001525 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107127662688 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2027661539 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696215975735 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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