It Is No Longer Possible for a Society to Regard Any Living Man or Woman as a Hero.
The medias influence on people is increasingly growing. our world today is being shaped by all kinds of media outlets, social media, news channels podcasts. information about what is going on around us is right at our fingertips thanks to advances in telecommunication technology. one of the biggest influences that this technology has brought is how it influences how we view people. it is commonplace that most of the news and other media we consume today thrive on negativity. Thus it is not surprising that most are of the view that in todays society there seems to be a lack of heroes who save the day, however , plenty of examples show that this is not the case. Various examples show us that various medias are still being used to bring to light heroes and enhance the reputation of those who do good.
In the year 2021, a man in France became a national hero due to his selfless act. a man by the name of Clifford who resides in France became an overnight hero when he saved a baby from an impending danger. Before he became renowned, Clifford was a homeless man living in the streets of france. he was also an illegal immigrant who had just migrated from Africa. France has very stringent laws against illegal immigrants. Had Clifford been discovered he would have been imprisoned or deported. On that faithful day, Clifford was walking in the street and came across a burning building. A baby was trapped on the top floor of the building and no one was able to rescue the baby. Clifford miraculously climbed the burning building and safely brought down the baby. this simple heroic act earned him respect and admiration. Videos were taken of his acts and were broadcasted by various media forms. he then became a national hero .In addition to this, he was granted permanent citizenship in France and offered a full time job by the president of France. After this act, people did not care about his reputation , the fact that he was an illegal immigrant , he was simply regarded as a hero.
another prominent example of a hero in todays society is Martha. Martha an Iranian journalist is today heralded celebrated by people all over the world as a very brave woman. Coming from a country known to censor women rights, Martha didn't not give up her dream of seeing her country put an end to archaic laws that discriminate women. She lobbied for womens rights in her country. her actions got her arrested many times and she never gave up. Martha's story got the attention of the world through an international journalist who was reporting on a case in a prison she was in . when her ordeal was reported on international news channels, international women's groups celebrated her as a hero and provided her various assistance. today, Martha is regarded as a heroine, a symbol of bravery and determination.
in conclusion, in todays world where media mainly focuses on reporting negative news , there are many examples of heroes to look upto and celebrate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2449.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76459143969 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67936516772 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511673151751 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9650347369 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4482758621 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.724137931 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55172413793 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117532370203 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308726025023 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377757545872 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586795528034 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207359434918 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.