In modern times, some species of animals are slowly disappearing. Do you think that it is acceptable for species to become extinct? What are the possible reasons of this extinction?
In modern era, all of living creatures will be dying out, especially some species of animals. I, personally state this is reasonable condition of animal disappearance, however, there are several causes of this which will be deliberated in this following essay.
On the one side, in my standpoint, one of natural disasters such as volcanic eruption brings about the decreasing number of existing animals. Such/those disasters induce catastrophic loss of life and wildlife habitat, eventually they would be difficult to seek both shelter and prey, hence, few could not breed successfully to continue thriving. Furthermore, predator-prey relationships are extremely crucial parts of the food chain. Reported by World Wildlife Fund (WWF) declares that one of aggressive seabirds, Arctic skuas, known as pirates frequently kill and eat its same species, including fledglings and even the adult Arctic skuas.
Regarding the causes, illegal trafficking can prompt imbalances of wildlife population as a result of human purposes. Generally, abalone, a large marine snail and high-end Chinese banquets, is arrested by a poacher. Not only consumption but also commercial ones (exporting and importing make Hong Kong restaurants serve abalone as a food delicacy. In addition, there has been serious genetic disease resulting in the threat to fauna (African Cheetah). In fact, lost some genetic diversity loss induced by inbreeding process endanger a population, where this increases Cheetahs’ homozygosity.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the vanishing of wildlife considers justifiable in this era that may include both a wide range of natural hazards and disruption of food chain cycles. Meanwhile, the remarkable causes of this phenomenon range from the mounting wildlife trafficking as well as serious genetic issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is increases Cheetahs’ homozygosity. In conclusion, it seems to me that the van...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61818181818 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01102327408 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0629896419 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853155277826 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277226722481 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045223097837 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589348272878 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689921903805 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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