In modern times, some species of animals are slowly disappearing. Do you think that it is acceptable for species to become extinct? What are the possible reasons of this extinction?
It is no doubt that the number of fauna has been decreased in today’s world. I opine the different perspective for reasonable points, however, this essay will outline the reasons behind the recent phenomenon.
First of all, it is obvious that when animal species is perished the crucial element of life, genome, will be lost inducing unmatched preservation actions as reported by National Geographic. Specifically, population genomic data become the specific approach in conservation management that can forecast animals’ inbreeding and adaptive capacity. Furthermore, animal extinction will pose a significant threat to the existing natural balance within the ecosystem. Along with disrupting stability of the food chain, Journal of Marine Science presents that a great loss of keystone species may generate domination communities in an area resulting in profound changes particularly the abundance of lower trophic levels.
Regarding the aforementioned statements, one of the reasons is that habitat loss has recorded as major factor particularly mammals and birds due to land clearing in Queensland. Considering that, it restricts expression of animals movement and behaviours for doing activities as well as cutting their basic needs to get well food supply and shelter. Moreover, irreversible loss of species can be caused by wildlife over-exploitation for commercial purpose. World Wildlife Fund shows that rarity of species drives up its market price, enabling profitable harvest of all remaining individuals and somewhat human desire to have as its collection fully impact on it.
To sum up, it seems to me that declining animal population nowadays emerges some potential drawbacks including losing library of life and ecological unstable. However, the noticeable causes behind this issue ranging from natural terrain degradation to over-hunting species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, no doubt, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7725631769 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06175496547 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703971119134 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5677523138 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196673533961 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576677790125 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322622674398 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972465169715 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267292617279 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.5 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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