Now a days more anc more people using technology what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.53571428571 5.12529762239 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.8586388271 2.80592935109 173% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.551613509 49.4020404114 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 329.4 106.682146367 309% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.4 20.7667163134 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.0 7.06120827912 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100609779335 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591570899799 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434577594523 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498026312839 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453714630083 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.6 13.0946893788 264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.57 50.2224549098 -43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 21.54 12.4159519038 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.07 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 9.78957915832 352% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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