Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives

Essay topics:

Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives.

Pros and cons of cell phones in our everyday life. The way I see it, There is not any absolute negativity in devices, It varies to our style of usage. It will cause us trouble providing that, our utilization will be detrimental methods.

A certain demographic of society plus I believe that the privilege of cellphones is vast enough to not even count it. The bold profit of mobile phones is the capability of installing any practical application that is relevant to our field of occupation. It is not only made career and education easier but also treat people to be the best version of themselves. There is a tons of work that we are unable to do. Nevertheless, it gives us knowledge of every task that is a mystery for users. For example, the calculation of math complex questions that could be solved just by the touch of a button. Hence, it is a versatile device that makes anyone capable.

On the other hand, there is a minority of individuals that believed smartphone addiction is a dark side of these devices and phone elimination is a solution. Besides, cell phones need waves and rays and this environment leads humanity into trouble. Additionally, mobile phones are the basic reason for indolent humanity. For example, nobody is wise and active without cell phones, all their ability has been taken by devices because they have not improved their talents. Thus, their ability is related to machines.

Mobile phones are double edge swords, Those have profit and weaknesses. Whereas it could not ignore their vast utilization, it could take our ability cause a habit of great outcomes with no effort will be our goals.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are a tons'?
Suggestion: There are a tons
...e to be the best version of themselves. There is a tons of work that we are unable to do. Never...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a ton' or simply 'tons'?
Suggestion: a ton; tons
...he best version of themselves. There is a tons of work that we are unable to do. Never...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8256227758 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66769123734 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3188148884 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7647058824 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187248843192 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571268753662 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662457822853 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117688357512 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324704390889 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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