Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this ?.
These days, more and more international companies are developed in developing countries. This has led to several benefits and drawbacks to local areas.
To begin with, multinational firms have some negative impacts on the local environment. In fact, in order to maximize profit, many companies dump industrial waste into rivers or seas without treatment, thus causing water pollution which makes marine creatures like fish die or become poisonous. To illustrate, the pangrim beotex company generated untreated industrial waste into Hong river, which had profound effects on the qualities of people’s lives as well as marine life. Furthermore, the jobs of these companies are not permanent because they could relocate to another country. As a result, a number of employees are more likely to be out of work and can not cover their expenses.
Transitional enterprises, on the other hand, bring many benefits to local regions. First, they create more opportunities of employment and train for local people, so they may mitigate their financial burden. For example, some companies like Google and Apple have many branches in many countries all over the world, which reduce the rate of unemployment in host nations. Second, these enterprises drive up the economy of developing countries and make reliable brands with high quality for local customers.
In conclusion, although international firms can be advantageous to the local economy and form more work opportunities for people , their detrimental impacts on the local environment should be taken into consideration
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48760330579 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93946443264 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0647955939 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13652176921 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485513609325 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040053652789 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860534766725 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467719253122 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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