1. You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbors disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
o describe how this situation affects you;
o explain what steps you have taken to address the problem;
o ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.
Dear Mr. Jackson
I am your tenant resting on Rose apartment in the flat number 6. I am writing this letter to inform you about the disturbance has been made by one of the neighbors.
As a matter of fact, recently, the children of Mr. Tom, the resident on the third floor, have made a lot of noise by playing violin and guitar all day and night. Because of this inconvenience, my husband and I are not able to get sufficient rest.
Last night, I requested Mr. Tom to ask their children to practice their musical instrument in the time ,8 am to 6 pm, we are at work. Unfortunately, He started arguing and defied my proposal.
I desperately ask you to talk with him about this issue and resolve it. Otherwise, you inform him that I will do further action and complain to the council
I hope you can resolve this matter soon.
Sincerely
Elham Mousavi
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ice their musical instrument in the time ,8 am to 6 pm, we are at work. Unfortunat...
^^
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s matter soon. Sincerely Elham Mousavi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, third, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46496815287 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60854271795 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.47838915 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8888888889 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224540538674 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788745838664 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794939576442 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124768374028 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870873837315 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ice their musical instrument in the time ,8 am to 6 pm, we are at work. Unfortunat...
^^
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s matter soon. Sincerely Elham Mousavi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, third, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46496815287 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60854271795 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.47838915 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8888888889 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224540538674 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788745838664 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794939576442 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124768374028 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870873837315 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.