Nowadays, a lot of people change the way of smoking: from conventional cigarettes to electronic ones.
Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this statement.
Nowadays, everything developed in an electronic way such as the dish washing, electronic door,… and not the exception of cigarettes. Lots of people change their way of smoking to electronic ones to be suitable. In my opinion this behavior is not clearly good, I will prove my thinking in the essay below.
Normally, everyone changes their smoking routine into electronic cigarettes because it has a good smell and lots of flavors. Besides that, the design of electronic cigarettes is luxury and if they are not a professional in this way they cannot recognise that. It just looks like decorated toys they bring with them. For example, some teenagers choose the electronic cigarettes for their entertainment before the pressure of learning or their family because it is designed luxury and the percentage of addiction is lower than conventional cigarettes.
On the other hand, smoking has an important responsibility to harm your kidney. Most people think that electronic cigarettes have a lower accident rate than cigarettes. But there are some studies about the harm of both cigarettes that proved the reason for the death of over 50% because cigarettes. Not only men but also women not except the pregnant. Smoking has caused lots of separation of family. If teenagers continue to use electronic cigarettes disorderly, it will implicate everyone around them. Some doctors said that not only users have cancer but also people who smell the cigarettes.
In conclusion, changing the conventional cigarettes to electronic is the way to decrease the number of deaths. But it is not the best way because it is the time to wait for more deaths. Avoiding cigarettes is the most important thing to protect our environment and for a better society.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an electronic way" with adverb for "electronic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
Nowadays, everything developed in an electronic way such as the dish washing, electronic do...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...uch as the dish washing, electronic door,… and not the exception of cigarettes. Lo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15438596491 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8659171431 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3180411763 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4117647059 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309730244004 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103940767576 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998574921704 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196026990849 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044676271814 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an electronic way" with adverb for "electronic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
Nowadays, everything developed in an electronic way such as the dish washing, electronic do...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...uch as the dish washing, electronic door,… and not the exception of cigarettes. Lo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15438596491 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8659171431 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3180411763 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4117647059 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309730244004 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103940767576 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998574921704 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196026990849 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044676271814 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.