Together with the development of human’s life standard, discussing earnings and spending is becoming common these days. There could be many reasons for this, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.
Nowadays, there are too many factors why people always like talking about those topics. Firstly, there are a lot of things that money is in need, such as foods, clothes, medicine and so on. Secondly, we also have to pay for a great number of bills and other fees. Finally, some sudden situations happen also need lots of money. Therefore, people always worry about whether they have enough money to look after themselves, to purchase the thing they want or not. Money has become the biggest problem people care about. For instance, my mom always thinks about how to use money in the best way, how to use the money to take care of my family but still have the ability to save a little amount of money for emergency. Whenever she wants to buy something, she often looks at the price to see as if it is suitable for her pocket or not.
In my point of view, the discussion about money has many advantages. When talking about this problem, people will know who makes more money than us, who has a more comfortable life than us,… Thence, they will have more motivations to endeavor in order to have a better life. Besides, during the conversations, people can learn a lot from the way to spend and save money suitably to run a business, or to manage our own spending. Not only that, when chatting with each other, we can know who is in need, so we can help them. May be just give them some advices, or help them with a few work.
In conclusion, talking about money in daily conversation is increasingly preferred and I believe that this trend is a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
... who has a more comfortable life than us,… Thence, they will have more motivations...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun work seems to be countable; consider using: 'few works'.
Suggestion: few works
... them some advices, or help them with a few work. In conclusion, talking about money in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5625 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43260526173 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8005562884 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317982438989 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958260526792 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080030503683 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196867164722 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864313787983 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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