These day, it cannot be denied that children should spend time on academic study instead of studying on the. In my perspective, online study should not be considered as a wasted-time activity.
To begin with, on the Internet, children can easily find online courses and documents which make their studies easier, because Internet can show most things students looking for through many websites. Resulting from that, students can enhance their self-study skills and qualities as well as building their studying experience.
Moreover, Internet provides students with a wide range of resources such as videos, exercise and so on, which helps them review previous lessons. It also helps students prepare for their next lessons. Children can take advantages of these works like remember lessons better, have good marks, get extra knowledge, etc.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned advantages of studying on the Internet, I firmly believed that online study should be balanced with study at school.
- Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success at school Do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 84
- Some people think that boys and girls should be educated in the same school Others however believe that girls achieve better results when educated in single sex school Discuss both these views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 56
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent playing sport is time wasted Do you agree 56
- Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with this statement Wri 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
These day, it cannot be denied that children shou...
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Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...n academic study instead of studying on the. In my perspective, online study should ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve good marks, get extra knowledge, etc. In conclusion, according to the aforeme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 156.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50641025641 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66292729685 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685897435897 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7812385866 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191845997994 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937833262379 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907384371502 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133665828253 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102163146315 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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