In this day and age, many people hold the view that teachers have the most vital role in education. From my perspective, I completely agree with this view and this essay will discuss two common roles of a teacher which are an advisor and a leader.
To begin with, teachers are good advisor. They provide the right advice fo students to make significant academic decisions that will guide them toward success in their future careers. Nothing is more obvious than the example of the highschool students, teachers work with them to offer advice and courses they should take to take the entrance exams, apply for the desired colleges and universities.
Next, teachers are leaders. They transfer the skills that will be helpful to students in their personal life. Teachers also guide students towards becoming leaders and involve the initiative that they must step into the unknown and out of their comfort zone to achieve tremendous success. In addition, teachers give students promtp emotional support and motivation, which assist them continue to enduce and achieve their goals.
In conclusion, teachers give advice and lead students to the suitable career, which is also an significant role.
- Some people think that boys and girls should be educated in the same school Others however believe that girls achieve better results when educated in single sex school Discuss both these views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 56
- Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success at school Do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion 61
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay 56
- Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with this statement Wri 61
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...s to the suitable career, which is also an significant role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18556701031 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46316254663 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2825469746 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177082386462 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781000238471 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698346854803 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118004152711 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863985873299 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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