You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Most people do not care enough about environment issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In contemporary society, there has been a growing debate concerning environmental protection. Many people adopt a view that most individuals are not concerned about problems related to environment. From my standpoint, I partly agree with this idea and my explanation would be presented during the course of this essay.
Obviously, environment is a complicated that leads to key reasons why most people are not interested in. One significant reason is that people believe environmental problems will not affect society for another 50 years. Therefore, at the present they never think of the consequence of not protecting environment. Another reason would be lack of understanding about environmental issues. In fact, recent studies show that just the minority of citizens fully have an indept knowledge of global warming or pollutions. As a result, environmental protection tends to be ignored.
However, a counter argument may be that young generations have much better understanding of these problems thanks to the internet which brings information and evidences as well. There is little doubt that the youth who are taught and prepared on pollution at school has raised their better awareness than the previous generations. To put it simply, it is easy to see many recycling activities or environment-related protection campaigns have been carried out and organized by the youngsters. Therefore, it is not true to confirm that most people do not take into consideration enough about environment.
In contemporary society, there has been a growing debate concerning environmental protection. Many people adopt a view that most individuals are not concerned about problems related to environment. From my standpoint, I partly agree with this idea and my explanation would be presented during the course of this essay.
Obviously, environment is a complicated that leads to key reasons why most people are not interested in. One significant reason is that people believe environmental problems will not affect society for another 50 years. Therefore, at the present they never think of the consequence of not protecting environment. Another reason would be lack of understanding about environmental issues. In fact, recent studies show that just the minority of citizens fully have an indept knowledge of global warming or pollutions. As a result, environmental protection tends to be ignored.
However, a counter argument may be that young generations have much better understanding of these problems thanks to the internet which brings information and evidences as well. There is little doubt that the youth who are taught and prepared on pollution at school has raised their better awareness than the previous generations. To put it simply, it is easy to see many recycling activities or environment-related proctection campains have been carried out and organized by the youngsters. Therefore, it is not true to confirm that most people do not take into consideration enough about environment.
In conclusion, the fact that whether environmental protection is concerned or not has sparked a controversy and captured a public attention. Personally, while I agree with the idea that not everyone considers environment, I am favor of environmental protection around the globe because I am a part of the youth, the future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...a and my explanation would be presented during the course of this essay. Obviously, environment is ...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...a and my explanation would be presented during the course of this essay. Obviously, environment is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 8.3376753507 396% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2822.0 1615.20841683 175% => OK
No of words: 517.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4584139265 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29265030666 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.338491295938 0.561755894193 60% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 506.74238477 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8128194486 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4642857143 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89285714286 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139324425115 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479087305947 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561541913707 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087067691138 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032399083534 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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