The charts show average levels of participation and the highest education level of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore.
The approximated levels of participation in education were displayed in a chart. The chart also shows the largest educational stage for grownups in Singapore from 2000 to 2010.
It is obvious that the biggest number of years spent in school for adults is in 2008 and in 2010. The hugest number for participators in education changed from high school qualifications in 2000 to university qualifications in 2010.
In 2000 the average number of years for adults had the least percentage in 2000 and 2002 for both males (just over 8 and just below 10 respectively) and females (by 8 in both years). The rate increases slowly year after year. Until it reaches its maximum in 2008 and 2010 for males (just over 10 and just under 12 respectively) and for females (just over 8).
For participators in education in 2000 the majority were high school qualifications by just over a third and secondary school qualifications by approximately one quarter. In contrast, the
minimum percentages were for university qualifications by 8.3% and master qualifications by 7.5%. However, in 2010 university and master qualifications jumped to become 32% and 30% respectively. In addition, secondary school qualifications and primary school qualifications got the least percentages by less than a fifth and an insignificant amount respectively.
- In recent years there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possib 56
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words 73
- The maps below the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton a neighboring town since 1962 67
- Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns leaving only old people in the countryside What problems are caused by this issue What can be done to solve this situation 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roximately one quarter. In contrast, the minimum percentages were for university ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, third, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37055285636 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466981132075 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1550713119 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.727272727 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237603602134 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112442180647 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122926945701 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174817879782 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176847574606 0.0819641961636 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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