Most people nowadays hold a similar view that traditional news is not possible at present. I partly agree with that statement and my reason will be shown in the paragraphs below.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why digital news is more comfortable than printed paper. To be specific, Reading online news will help you that are easier with just one click and you can always update hot news anywhere and whatever you want. Moreover, digital news is a range category, especially online news can use voice or videos which help you feel more excited when reading them. There are those who argue that if you want to look forward to old information, you can use simple operations to find them, however, with paper news, when you forgot them, you are difficult to read them again. For instance, Spotify is an application that can be used for listening to podcasts and it is convenient for hearing disabled people to know the news in the day.
On the other hand, reading the news in papers is also an option for elder people and people who do not know to use digital technology. In spite of living in the digital, older people still face technology blindness so that is the reason why we should continue to create paper news because it is the only material that helps them to know the news every day. Moreover, printed paper news has a value stored as text for researchers and customers. Besides that, paper news is suitable for people with no economy because it is distributed to everyone without losing any money.
In conclusion, I believe that reading on paper is still suitable for some people, however, digital news is more comfortable for people who are busy and spend less time reading, especially, since it helps people to promote the new experience in the technology age.
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- The picture illustrates how a medical centre changed after some developments in 2010 compared to 2008 73
- The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72204472843 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41331456948 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533546325879 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0097844832 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186416013607 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762565201349 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399557066737 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110676451878 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418967550562 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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